Learning Outcomes
After studying this article, you will confidently interpret descriptive and narrative writing tasks, plan effectively under exam conditions, and generate creative ideas for AO5 and AO6 on AQA GCSE English Language 8700. You will be able to select suitable story concepts, match content to task details, structure a clear plan, and develop a bank of original ideas for both descriptions and narratives.
AQA GCSE English Language 8700 Syllabus
For AQA GCSE English Language 8700, the skills below are essential for success in descriptive and narrative writing:
- Write clearly, imaginatively, and purposefully, matching style to audience and task (AO5)
- Organise and structure writing for maximum impact (AO5)
- Generate and select relevant ideas in response to a task or prompt (AO5)
- Use a range of vocabulary and sentence forms accurately (AO6)
- Apply correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar for clarity and effect (AO6)
Test Your Knowledge
Attempt these questions before reading this article. If you find some difficult or cannot remember the answers, remember to look more closely at that area during your revision.
- List three common requirements in a descriptive or narrative AQA writing task. How should you respond?
- What are two effective strategies for generating content ideas quickly when given a visual or written prompt?
- An exam question asks you to “Write a description suggested by this picture.” Which planning steps should you follow before you start drafting?
- Name two features examiners expect in the structure of a strong opening for a story or description.
Introduction
Success in AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, Question 5 comes down to how well you interpret the task, plan your answer, and generate ideas that are original and relevant. This is the moment you show your ability to write engaging narrative openings or vivid descriptions, using a carefully planned structure and imaginative approaches. This article examines how to break down the question, choose the best route, plan rapidly, and collect ideas that meet AO5 and AO6.
Key Term: narrative
A piece of writing that tells a story, often featuring characters, conflict, and a clear sequence of events.Key Term: description
A piece of writing that creates a vivid picture for the reader, focusing on atmosphere, detail, and sensory language.Key Term: task interpretation
The process of understanding exactly what a writing prompt is asking, including purpose, form, and audience.Key Term: planning
Outlining the focus and structure of your writing before you begin the response, to ensure logical organisation and relevant content.Key Term: generating ideas
Developing and selecting content—such as character, setting, events, or details—suitable for a specific writing task.
Interpreting the Task
The most common creative writing question types in the exam are either to ‘Write a description suggested by this picture’ or to ‘Write the opening part of a story about…’. Analysing exactly what is being asked ensures your answer is fully relevant.
When you first read the task, underline key words and identify the audience, form (story or description), and required content. Decide whether you should focus on action, atmosphere, or a mix of both.
Key Term: task interpretation
The process of understanding exactly what a writing prompt is asking, including purpose, form, and audience.
Worked Example 1.1
Task: “Write a description suggested by this picture.”
A photograph shows a deserted pier stretching across dark water under heavy clouds. What should you do first?
Answer:
Underline “description” and “suggested by this picture.” You must focus on using rich, sensory details to build atmosphere, not a full narrative with a developed plot. Look for sensory cues in the image—dark, empty, cold, silent. Make a quick list of details noticeable in the picture, then decide what mood you want to create. Only after this focused analysis should you proceed to planning.
Exam Warning
Do not ignore the task instructions. If you write a complete story when asked for a description, or describe without narrative structure when told to ‘write a story’, you could lose marks for not matching the form and purpose.
Planning: Effective Structure and Time Management
Your plan should be rapid, clear, and tailored to the task. Brief notes or a quick paragraph plan are best—not a detailed outline. For an AQA exam, spend about 5 minutes planning.
Key Term: planning
Outlining the focus and structure of your writing before you begin the response, to ensure logical organisation and relevant content.
A solid plan includes:
- The chosen setting or scenario (e.g. misty forest, ruined station)
- Key details or events (for description, sensory images; for narrative, key plot points)
- The sequence of your writing: what will you begin with, what will you build up to?
- The mood or tone (e.g. tense, peaceful, ominous)
- Vivid details or motifs (recurring ideas/images)
A clear plan is your checklist for writing.
Worked Example 1.2
Task: "Write the opening part of a story about running away at night."
A quick plan might look like:
- Para 1: Opening—character stands at open window, heart pounding, streets below empty.
- Para 2: Silence broken by distant barking dog, moonlight casts long shadows.
- Para 3: Character descends stairs, pauses to listen—describes textures, sounds, smells.
- Para 4: Door creaks open, first steps outside, resolves never to return.
Answer:
These notes keep the writing focused and provide structure, ensuring the scene unfolds in a logical order and each paragraph has a specific function. This allows you to avoid rushing or running out of ideas partway through your answer.
Generating Ideas: Quick, Creative Approaches
Key Term: generating ideas
Developing and selecting content—such as character, setting, events, or details—suitable for a specific writing task.
To generate high-quality ideas rapidly in an exam:
- Study the picture or prompt closely. Jot down 3–5 key sensory details.
- Think of unusual angles—for example, focus on background details, hidden sounds, or feelings beneath the obvious.
- Visualise the most important moment (for narrative) or the atmosphere (for description).
- Use varied senses—not just sight, but also sound, smell, touch, and taste.
- Consider a motif or extended metaphor (e.g. recurring idea of “shadows” or “silk and smoke”).
Quick idea prompts:
- "What would you see/hear/smell if you were inside this scene?"
- "If the scene had a secret or tension, what would it be?"
- "What tiny detail might reveal a character’s emotion?"
Worked Example 1.3
Prompt: An abandoned train station at dusk. Write a description suggested by this image.
Plan:
- Sight: Weeds growing between the rails, orange light flickering on windows.
- Sound: Metal echoing, distant footsteps, wind whistling.
- Smell: Rust, dampness, hint of oil.
- Atmosphere: Uneasy quiet, as if something is about to happen.
Answer:
By quickly capturing unusual sensory clues and atmosphere, you develop content that is both engaging and original. This approach ensures your writing stands out and stays focused on the exam task.
Revision Tip
Create a bank of atmospheric scenes or character moments before the exam. Practise planning a paragraph for each. This boosts confidence and gives you ready-made ideas to use or adjust in the exam.
Summary
Start by interpreting every word of the writing task. Plan quickly in notes or bullet points, thinking in terms of sequence and mood. Generate ideas by zooming in on sensory detail and emotion, drawing on a range of senses and images. For narrative, focus on action and structure; for description, focus on atmosphere and detail. Always keep your plan visible as you write.
Key Point Checklist
This article has covered the following key knowledge points:
- Identify purpose, audience, and form in descriptive and narrative writing tasks.
- Plan efficiently, producing clear outlines that guide your writing.
- Generate vivid, original details suitable for narrative openings and descriptions.
- Use quick methods to match content and structure to the requirements of AQA GCSE English Language exams.
Key Terms and Concepts
- narrative
- description
- task interpretation
- planning
- generating ideas