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  • Source A: 19th-century prose fiction
  • The Time Machine by H. G. Wells

An extract from a work first published in 1895.

This extract is taken from The Time Machine by H. G. Wells, where the Time Traveller arrives in a distant future amid a thunderstorm, sees a colossal White Sphinx and huge buildings, grapples with fear and his machine, and watches figures approach in a garden.

Source A

1 “There was the sound of a clap of thunder in my ears. I may have been stunned for a moment. A pitiless hail was hissing round me, and I was sitting on soft turf in front of the overset machine. Everything still seemed grey, but presently I remarked that the confusion in my ears was gone. I looked round me. I was on what seemed to be a little lawn in a garden, surrounded by

6 rhododendron bushes, and I noticed that their mauve and purple blossoms were dropping in a shower under the beating of the hailstones. The rebounding, dancing hail hung in a little cloud over the machine, and drove along the ground like smoke. In a moment I was wet to the skin. ‘Fine hospitality,’ said I, ‘to a man who has travelled innumerable years to see you.’

11 “Presently I thought what a fool I was to get wet. I stood up and looked round me. A colossal figure, carved apparently in some white stone, loomed indistinctly beyond the rhododendrons through the hazy downpour. But all else of the world was invisible.

16 “My sensations would be hard to describe. As the columns of hail grew thinner, I saw the white figure more distinctly. It was very large, for a silver birch- tree touched its shoulder. It was of white marble, in shape something like a winged sphinx, but the wings, instead of being carried vertically at the

21 sides, were spread so that it seemed to hover. The pedestal, it appeared to me, was of bronze, and was thick with verdigris. It chanced that the face was towards me; the sightless eyes seemed to watch me; there was the faint shadow of a smile on the lips. It was greatly weather-worn, and that imparted an unpleasant suggestion of disease. I stood looking at it for a little

26 space—half a minute, perhaps, or half an hour. It seemed to advance and to recede as the hail drove before it denser or thinner. At last I tore my eyes from it for a moment, and saw that the hail curtain had worn threadbare, and that the sky was lightening with the promise of the sun.

31 “I looked up again at the crouching white shape, and the full temerity of my voyage came suddenly upon me. What might appear when that hazy curtain was altogether withdrawn? What might not have happened to men? What if cruelty had grown into a common passion? What if in this interval the race had lost its manliness, and had developed into something inhuman, unsympathetic, and

36 overwhelmingly powerful? I might seem some old-world savage animal, only the more dreadful and disgusting for our common likeness—a foul creature to be incontinently slain. “Already I saw other vast shapes—huge buildings with intricate parapets and

41 tall columns, with a wooded hillside dimly creeping in upon me through the lessening storm. I was seized with a panic fear. I turned frantically to the Time Machine, and strove hard to readjust it. As I did so the shafts of the sun smote through the thunderstorm. The grey downpour was swept aside and vanished like the trailing garments of a ghost. Above me, in the intense blue

46 of the summer sky, some faint brown shreds of cloud whirled into nothingness. The great buildings about me stood out clear and distinct, shining with the wet of the thunderstorm, and picked out in white by the unmelted hailstones piled along their courses. I felt naked in a strange world. I felt as perhaps a bird may feel in the clear air, knowing the hawk wings above and will swoop.

51 My fear grew to frenzy. I took a breathing space, set my teeth, and again grappled fiercely, wrist and knee, with the machine. It gave under my desperate onset and turned over. It struck my chin violently. One hand on the saddle, the other on the lever, I stood panting heavily in attitude to mount again.

56 “But with this recovery of a prompt retreat my courage recovered. I looked more curiously and less fearfully at this world of the remote future. In a circular opening, high up in the wall of the nearer house, I saw a group of figures clad in rich soft robes. They had seen me, and their faces were

61 directed towards me. “Then I heard voices approaching me. Coming through the bushes by the White Sphinx were the heads and shoulders of men running. One of these emerged in a pathway leading straight to the little lawn upon which I stood with my

66 machine. He was a slight creature—perhaps four feet high—clad in a purple tunic, girdled at the waist with a leather belt. Sandals or buskins—I could not clearly distinguish which—were on his feet; his legs were bare to the knees, and his head was bare. Noticing that, I noticed for the first time how warm the air was.

71 “He struck me as being a very beautiful and graceful creature, but indescribably frail. His flushed face reminded me of the more beautiful kind of consumptive—that hectic beauty of which we used to hear so much. At the sight of him I suddenly regained confidence. I took my hands from the machine.


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  • The marks for questions are shown in brackets.
  • Time allowed: 1 hour 45 minutes
  • The maximum mark for this paper is 80.
  • There are 40 marks for Section A and 40 marks for Section B.
  • You are reminded of the need for good English and clear presentation in your answers.
  • You will be assessed on the quality of your reading in Section A.
  • You will be assessed on the quality of your writing in Section B.

Advice

  • You are advised to spend about 15 minutes reading through the source and all five questions you have to answer.
  • You should make sure you leave sufficient time to check your answers.

Section A: Reading

Answer all questions in this section. You are advised to spend about 45 minutes on this section.

Question 1

Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5.

Answer all parts of this question.

Choose one answer for each question.

1.1 What sound was in the narrator's ears?

  • a clap of thunder
  • a crash of waves
  • a roar of wind

[1 mark]

1.2 What was hissing round the narrator?

  • a pitiless hail
  • a driving rain
  • a gusting wind

[1 mark]

1.3 Where was the narrator sitting?

  • on soft turf in front of the overset machine
  • on a stone step beside the machine
  • on a wooden bench near the machine

[1 mark]

1.4 What change does the narrator notice in the narrator's hearing a moment later?

  • The confusion in the narrator's ears clears.
  • A persistent ringing replaces the earlier confusion.
  • The hail grows louder until it overwhelms every other sound.

[1 mark]

Question 2

Look in detail at this extract, from lines 16 to 25 of the source:

16 “My sensations would be hard to describe. As the columns of hail grew thinner, I saw the white figure more distinctly. It was very large, for a silver birch- tree touched its shoulder. It was of white marble, in shape something like a winged sphinx, but the wings, instead of being carried vertically at the

21 sides, were spread so that it seemed to hover. The pedestal, it appeared to me, was of bronze, and was thick with verdigris. It chanced that the face was towards me; the sightless eyes seemed to watch me; there was the faint shadow of a smile on the lips. It was greatly weather-worn, and that imparted an unpleasant suggestion of disease. I stood looking at it for a little

How does the writer use language here to present the white figure and the narrator’s feelings? You could include the writer’s choice of:

  • words and phrases
  • language features and techniques
  • sentence forms.

[8 marks]

Question 3

You now need to think about the structure of the source as a whole. This text is from the beginning of a story.

How has the writer structured the text to create a sense of curiosity?

You could write about:

  • how curiosity emerges by the end of the source
  • how the writer uses structure to create an effect
  • the writer's use of any other structural features, such as changes in mood, tone or perspective.

[8 marks]

Question 4

For this question focus on the second part of the source, from line 31 to the end.

In this part of the source, the White Sphinx statue is described as unsettling and diseased. The writer suggests there is something secretly wrong or threatening hiding in this new world.

To what extent do you agree and/or disagree with this statement?

In your response, you could:

  • consider your impressions of the White Sphinx statue
  • comment on the methods the writer uses to suggest a hidden threat
  • support your response with references to the text.

[20 marks]

Question 5

A local vet surgery is celebrating fifty years and wants creative entries for a memory book.

Choose one of the options below for your entry.

  • Option A: Describe an old and much-loved pet from your imagination. You may choose to use the picture provided for ideas:

    Grey muzzle of a sleeping old dog

  • Option B: Write the opening of a story about a difficult farewell.

(24 marks for content and organisation, 16 marks for technical accuracy)

[40 marks]

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